Haiku: Happy Valentine

Hello people, here ’tis my haiku for Ronovan Write’s Haiku Challenge #83: Gem & Flame.

 

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I’ve used the Haiku in English form ( 5 / 7 / 5  syllables)

The two sentences:

Burning words of love flaming like gems of heartsblood.

Flaming like gems of heartsblood, my crushed valentine.

Okay, I admit they aren’t great sentences.  🙂

Image:  I photographed this rose on a bed of ash especially for the challenge. I hope I captured the intended ‘feel’ of my haiku.
(Nokia Lumia 520)

Have a good day.   🙂

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7 Comments Add yours

  1. I can’t get over how velvety the rose petals are. Love the Haiku. Perfect for Valentines. ❤ ❤ ❤

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    1. ChristineR says:

      The flowers on that rose always photograph like velvet. Has a very rich scent, too. Thanks for commenting Tess.

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  2. sue says:

    Beautiful blossom.

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  3. Great picture! Good haiku. 🙂

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    1. ChristineR says:

      Thank you, Vashti.

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      1. You’re welcome. 😀 xx

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